Quarter 4: Week 5, Post B

Dear Laila,

I really like your story so far! I've only read a few chapters, but I can already tell I'm going to enjoy it. The fact that you are so much younger than Mariam makes your story slightly more light-hearted and gives a fresh perspective. It's funny how even though you and Mariam live on the same street your stories are completely different. While Mariam is dealing with an abusive new husband, you are growing up in a home with two parents who fight constantly and a mother who is depressed.

I admire your relationship with your dad, or Babi. You seem to take after him and the two of you clearly share a bond that you and your mother do not. It's sad that he gets attacked by your mother for such tiny insignificant things, and he just quietly takes it. You should stick up for him to her once; maybe it would help your family situation. But I can understand why you might be afraid to make such a bold move. With your mother's moods so completely crazy, I wouldn't want to do anything to set her off either.

I also like hearing about your friendship with Tariq. It must be so nice to have a friend who you've known since you were little. The two of you seem to know each other really well and balance each other nicely. I can tell you're really missing him while he's away. Maybe you two will become more than friends as you get older...who knows! But for now, it's just nice that you have such a good supportive friend in your life to talk to when things get tough at home or at school with those nasty boys. I can't believe they sprayed pee at you!! I would be soo mad if any boy ever did that to me. You didn't do anything to deserve such cruelty! I hope they let up soon and that you can stick up for yourself next time!

Good luck,

A-Rod